2024 Cornell Optimization Open Textbook Feedback - Revision history

SYSEN5800TAs at 23:26, 17 December 2024

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	*The application section was not well drafted and supported by references.		*The application section was not well drafted and supported by references.

	== [[~~Dynamic optimization~~]] ==		== [[Eight step procedures]] ==
	*For the algorithm description, it would be better to have a pseudocode or a flow chart to summarize it.		*For the algorithm description, it would be better to have a pseudocode or a flow chart to summarize it.
	*Please use Latex equation editor for equations.		*Please use Latex equation editor for equations.

SYSEN5800TAs at 23:26, 17 December 2024

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	*The clarity of the alghrithm and numerical example session needs to be improved. It is convenient to list all equations, but not good to present it to others.		*The clarity of the alghrithm and numerical example session needs to be improved. It is convenient to list all equations, but not good to present it to others.
	*More citations are needed for supporting your statement.		*More citations are needed for supporting your statement.


	== [[AdamW]] ==		== [[AdamW]] ==

Wc593: /* Differential evolution */

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Differential evolution

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	== [[Differential evolution]] ==		== [[Differential evolution]] ==
	*~~Make sure~~ abbreviations are ~~consistent~~ throughout the context ~~(e.g. Please define DE at the introduction section not in the later section, please check the similar cases as well)~~.		*Once abbreviations are introduced, please make sure the full term do not appear throughout the context.
	*Visualization section is not necessary. Figures should be embedded in the Wiki page.		*Visualization section is not necessary. Figures should be embedded in the Wiki page.
	*Conclusion and References sections should not belong to Application section.		*Conclusion and References sections should not belong to Application section.
	*References are already shown at the bottom of the page. The extra list should be removed.		*References are already shown at the bottom of the page. The extra list should be removed.

Wc593: /* Evolutionary multimodal optimization */

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Evolutionary multimodal optimization

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	== [[Evolutionary multimodal optimization]] ==		== [[Evolutionary multimodal optimization]] ==
	*Please include more citations in Algorithm Discussion section to support the contents.		*Please include more citations in Algorithm Discussion section to support the contents.
	*Adding some figures may help reader to understand the content.
	*Please use FigureX as a reference in the text.		*Please use FigureX as a reference in the text.

Wc593: Edited Team 23-26 feedbacks

2024-12-17T20:47:48Z

Edited Team 23-26 feedbacks

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	== [[Heuristic algorithms]] ==		== [[Heuristic algorithms]] ==
	*~~More~~ details on the Application Section.		*Adding more details to the Application Section is recommended.
	*Please ~~come up with one numerical example with hill-climbing.~~		*Please use FigureX as a reference in the text.
	*Please add more references to support the content in the ~~Introduction section.~~		*Avoid using contraction (e.g., there's) in scientific writing.
	*Please add figure captions for the pseudocodes.
	*Avoid using contraction (e.g., we'~~re) and pronouns (e.g., we~~) in scientific writing.
	*ResearchGate is not a publisher. Please check the reference again.

	== [[Local branching]] ==		== [[Local branching]] ==
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	== [[Evolutionary multimodal optimization]] ==		== [[Evolutionary multimodal optimization]] ==
	*~~It would be better to have subsections of each approach~~ in ~~the~~ Algorithm Discussion section ~~to improve the clarity.~~		*Please include more citations in Algorithm Discussion section to support the contents.
	*The logic flow and clarity of both the Algorithm Discussion section and Numerical Example section need to be largely improved.
	*Please include citations to support the ~~Wiki~~ contents.
	*Please make sure abbreviations should be consistent throughout the context.
	*In-text citations are required.
	*Please add mathematical expressions to Algorithm Discussion section for explicitness.
	*Please provide step by step calculation for the numerical example.
	*Adding some figures may help reader to understand the content.		*Adding some figures may help reader to understand the content.
			*Please use FigureX as a reference in the text.

	== [[Stackelberg leadership model]] ==		== [[Stackelberg leadership model]] ==
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	== [[Differential evolution]] ==		== [[Differential evolution]] ==
	*Provide more references to support the statements made in the Application Section.
	*Make sure abbreviations are consistent throughout the context (e.g. Please define DE at the introduction section not in the later section, please check the similar cases as well).		*Make sure abbreviations are consistent throughout the context (e.g. Please define DE at the introduction section not in the later section, please check the similar cases as well).
	*~~In-text citations are required~~.		*Visualization section is not necessary. Figures should be embedded in the Wiki page.
	*The symbols in the ~~pseudocode is not in proper format. Please use Latex equation editor for this~~.		*Conclusion and References sections should not belong to Application section.
	*~~Please number~~ and ~~label all figures, use FigureX as a reference in the text~~.		*References are already shown at the bottom of the page. The extra list should be removed.
	*~~Please add more details to numerical example (e~~.g.~~, replace x = -7 with -5 because f(x1) > f(u1))~~

Wc593: Edited Team19-22 feedback

2024-12-17T20:24:30Z

Edited Team19-22 feedback

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	== [[Trust-region methods]] ==		== [[Trust-region methods]] ==
	*~~For~~ the ~~applications section, a better method is~~ to ~~briefly summarize~~ the ~~advantages of the method~~ in ~~multiple areas, instead of presents its application on two very specific cases~~.		*Please label the figures with numbers and direct readers to the figures in text.
	*~~Please try to update equations on page 5.~~		*References were not well formatted (e.g., Yuan, Y. (2015b)).
	*Please try to use the pseudocode for the procedure described on page 3.
	*m_k and p in eq.(1) are not ~~defined.~~
	*Fix the typo “prediced reduction” in eq.(3).
	*Avoid using contraction (e.g., ~~it’s~~, ~~doesn’t) and pronouns (e~~.~~g., we, us) in scientific writing.~~
	*Rewrite the sentence, “Identical to line search, we do not need to compute the algorithm (2)~~” as (2~~) ~~itself is not an algorithm.~~
	*The termination conditions are not complete in section “Termination Criteria”.
	*Fletcher is not the same author as cited in [5].

	== [[Quadratic programming]] ==		== [[Quadratic programming]] ==
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	== [[Dynamic optimization]] ==		== [[Dynamic optimization]] ==
	*For the algorithm description, it would be better to have a pseudocode or a flow chart to summarize it.		*For the algorithm description, it would be better to have a pseudocode or a flow chart to summarize it.
	*~~Attaching code to the Wiki editing page is not recommended.~~		*Please use Latex equation editor for equations.
	*It would be better to provide more references for ~~supporting the statements made in the Application Section~~.		*Please number and label all figures and tables, use FigureX, TableX as a reference in the text.
	*Please ~~try to add more citations in the introduction section.~~		*Please place references after the period at the end of each sentence and avoid after the optimization problems. This goes for all the sections in the wiki.
	*In-text citations are required.
	*Avoid using contraction (e.g., you've, don't) and ~~pronouns (e.g.~~, we, ~~us)~~ in ~~scientific writing~~.
	*Please ~~add some mathematical expressions to Algorithm Discussion section for explicitness.~~
	*Adding a different type of ~~problem would be recommended instead of making Knapsack Problem larger size~~.
	*In-text citation should be added to figure captions.

	== [[Nondifferentiable Optimization]] ==		== [[Nondifferentiable Optimization]] ==
	*~~If the topic is about nondifferntial optimization, then it would be strange that only one approach is included in the~~ Wiki page.		*Most contents are from previous year. The Wiki page should be your original content.
	*It is also recommended to revise the citation format ~~in the file~~ based on our example files.		*It is also recommended to revise the citation format based on our example files.
	*Please add the case of non convex functions.		*Please add the case of non convex functions.
	*Please add references to support the content in the Introduction section. In-text citations are required.		*Please add references to support the content in the Introduction section. In-text citations are required.
	*Please use Latex equation editor for typing symbols and equations.		*Please use Latex equation editor for typing symbols and equations.
	*~~There are multiple methods introduced in the Introduction section. Please expand the Algorithm Discussion~~ section ~~and add more details.~~		*The Numerical Example section is incomplete.
	*The provided example is ~~somewhat trivial. Please provide a more sophisticated example~~.		*Application and Conclusion sections are missing.
	*~~It should be "CVXPY" instead of "CVXpy" and "MATLAB" instead of "Matlab" in~~ Application and Conclusion sections.

	== [[Evolutionary multimodal optimization]] ==		== [[Evolutionary multimodal optimization]] ==
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	== [[Adadelta]] ==		== [[Adadelta]] ==
	*~~Adding a subsection title to divide the numerical examples will improve the clarity of this file.~~		*There is an extra line of citation links in the References section.
	*Please add the platforms (e.g. PyTorch, TF) to illustrate how this algorithm is ~~introduced.~~
	*Avoid using contraction (e.g., it’s, doesn’t) and pronouns (e.g., we, let's) in scientific writing.
	*Citation of ~~each algorithm should be added~~ in the ~~sentence "such as RMSprop, Adam, and Nadam, exist as well."~~
	*Abbreviations should be introduced one time only throughout all sections (e.g., RNNs).

	== [[Adafactor]] ==		== [[Adafactor]] ==

SYSEN5800TAs at 18:30, 17 December 2024

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	== [[LossScaleOptimizer\|LossscaleOptimizer]] ==		== [[LossScaleOptimizer\|LossscaleOptimizer]] ==
			*More citations are needed for supporting the statement and applications.

	== [[Nadam]] ==		== [[Nadam]] ==

SYSEN5800TAs at 18:28, 17 December 2024

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	== [[LossScaleOptimizer\|LossscaleOptimizer]] ==		== [[LossScaleOptimizer\|LossscaleOptimizer]] ==
	*Provide more citations to support your statements in the Application section?
	*Provide a figure to demonstrate the results generated from the numerical example?
	*Please provide more applications
	*Please provide the platform which used such algorithms
	*The Conclusion section is missing.

	== [[Nadam]] ==		== [[Nadam]] ==

SYSEN5800TAs at 18:26, 17 December 2024

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	== [[AdamW]] ==		== [[AdamW]] ==
	*Please double-check if the citations are correctly formatted in the text.
	*For the application section, it would be good to emphasize the advantages of AdamW compared to other approach by citing the quantitative results from previous literature.		*For the application section, it would be good to emphasize the advantages of AdamW compared to other approach by citing the quantitative results from previous literature.
	*Please provide flowchart/pseudocode for representing your procedure
	*Please provide citations for your statement (e.g. how AdamW used in Finance, where is your source)
	*Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we, let's) in scientific writing.		*Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we, let's) in scientific writing.
	*The code snippet in the Application section can be removed.

	== [[Adamax]] ==		== [[Adamax]] ==

SYSEN5800TAs at 18:23, 17 December 2024

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	== [[Derivative free optimization]] ==		== [[Derivative free optimization]] ==
	*Please avoid the use of the term like "you" or "we" in the Wiki file.
	*Please include more citations to support your statements in the application section.
	*Please add more citations to support your statement in the introduction section
	*Please try to include a flowchart or pseudocode for illustration of the algorithm.		*Please try to include a flowchart or pseudocode for illustration of the algorithm.
	*If DFO is defined in the previous sections, please use such abbreviations consistently (same for other abbreviations).		*If DFO is defined in the previous sections, please use such abbreviations consistently (same for other abbreviations).
	*Please add subheadings in the Application section for better readability.

	== [[Signomial problems]] ==		== [[Signomial problems]] ==