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- References were not provided to support applications on computer science and quantum computing.
- Adding more details to the Application Section is recommended.
- Please use FigureX as a reference in the text.
- Avoid using contraction (e.g., there's) in scientific writing.
- The title should be “Problem Solution” instead of ”Problem Resolution“.
- The added figure is too small for viewing from the main page and also lacks captions and explanations.
- There are still some formatting issues with the subtitles. For example, some are in bold form while others are not in the content.
- Please label the figures with numbers and direct readers to the figures in text.
- References were not well formatted (e.g., Yuan, Y. (2015b)).
- An inappropriate nonconvex example was used in the Wiki Page. The problem is an MIQP problem instead of a single QP problem.
- Some symbols used in the pseudocodes still lack explanation.
- References were not well formatted.
- Symbols used in equations lack explanations.
- The application section was not well drafted and supported by references.
- For the algorithm description, it would be better to have a pseudocode or a flow chart to summarize it.
- Please use Latex equation editor for equations.
- Please number and label all figures and tables, use FigureX, TableX as a reference in the text.
- Please place references after the period at the end of each sentence and avoid after the optimization problems. This goes for all the sections in the wiki.
- Most contents are from previous year. The Wiki page should be your original content.
- It is also recommended to revise the citation format based on our example files.
- Please add the case of non convex functions.
- Please add references to support the content in the Introduction section. In-text citations are required.
- Please use Latex equation editor for typing symbols and equations.
- The Numerical Example section is incomplete.
- Application and Conclusion sections are missing.
- Please include more citations in Algorithm Discussion section to support the contents.
- Please use FigureX as a reference in the text.
- Please use flowchart/pseudocode for representing the steps of algorithm
- Check the consistency of abbreviations (e.g. what is PAWS?)
- Form of in-text citation is not proper
- Abbreviations should be introduced only once throughout all sections (e.g., QCQP, QP, SDP)
- Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we) in scientific writing.
- Please try to include a flowchart or pseudocode for illustration of the algorithm.
- If DFO is defined in the previous sections, please use such abbreviations consistently (same for other abbreviations).
- There is a lack of numerical examples for illustrating the global optimization method introduced on the Wiki page.
- The clarification of the equations used in the Introduction section needs to be improved.
- There is an extra line of citation links in the References section.
- The clarity of the alghrithm and numerical example session needs to be improved. It is convenient to list all equations, but not good to present it to others.
- More citations are needed for supporting your statement.
- For the application section, it would be good to emphasize the advantages of AdamW compared to other approach by citing the quantitative results from previous literature.
- Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we, let's) in scientific writing.
- The pseudocode was not well defined. More explanations and logical flow are needed.
- Citations need to be included in the punctuation like period.
- Since this is a modified version of Adam, a comparison with Adam is needed for the numerical example.
- A machine learning case is needed since this is an algorithm designed for machine learning models.
- It is very difficult to clarify different levels of subtitles based on the text.
- References were not well formatted. For example, "[1]" is added to many references with no meaning.
- Some symbols used in the equation lack explanations.
- More citations are needed for supporting the statement and applications.
- The result figures of the numerical example have not been placed in the proper place.
- The numerical example and application parts are still not representative of illustrating NDAM's performance for machine learning models.
- Citation form (in text) should be double checked.
- Please provide some citations for supporting your statement (e.g. in Introduction)
- Once the abbr. is defined please use it throughout the context (e.g. SA)
- Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we) in scientific writing.
- The caption was missed for the iteration results.
- Once abbreviations are introduced, please make sure the full term do not appear throughout the context.
- Visualization section is not necessary. Figures should be embedded in the Wiki page.
- Conclusion and References sections should not belong to Application section.
- References are already shown at the bottom of the page. The extra list should be removed.