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- References were not provided to support applications on computer science and quantum computing.
- More details on the Application Section.
- Please come up with one numerical example with hill-climbing.
- Please add more references to support the content in the Introduction section.
- Please add figure captions for the pseudocodes.
- Avoid using contraction (e.g., we're) and pronouns (e.g., we) in scientific writing.
- ResearchGate is not a publisher. Please check the reference again.
- The title should be “Problem Solution” instead of ”Problem Resolution“.
- The added figure is too small for viewing from the main page and also lacks captions and explanations.
- There are still some formatting issues with the subtitles. For example, some are in bold form while others are not in the content.
- For the applications section, a better method is to briefly summarize the advantages of the method in multiple areas, instead of presents its application on two very specific cases.
- Please try to update equations on page 5.
- Please try to use the pseudocode for the procedure described on page 3.
- m_k and p in eq.(1) are not defined.
- Fix the typo “prediced reduction” in eq.(3).
- Avoid using contraction (e.g., it’s, doesn’t) and pronouns (e.g., we, us) in scientific writing.
- Rewrite the sentence, “Identical to line search, we do not need to compute the algorithm (2)” as (2) itself is not an algorithm.
- The termination conditions are not complete in section “Termination Criteria”.
- Fletcher is not the same author as cited in [5].
- An inappropriate nonconvex example was used in the Wiki Page. The problem is an MIQP problem instead of a single QP problem.
- Some symbols used in the pseudocodes still lack explanation.
- References were not well formatted.
- Symbols used in equations lack explanations.
- The application section was not well drafted and supported by references.
- For the algorithm description, it would be better to have a pseudocode or a flow chart to summarize it.
- Attaching code to the Wiki editing page is not recommended.
- It would be better to provide more references for supporting the statements made in the Application Section.
- Please try to add more citations in the introduction section.
- In-text citations are required.
- Avoid using contraction (e.g., you've, don't) and pronouns (e.g., we, us) in scientific writing.
- Please add some mathematical expressions to Algorithm Discussion section for explicitness.
- Adding a different type of problem would be recommended instead of making Knapsack Problem larger size.
- In-text citation should be added to figure captions.
- If the topic is about nondifferntial optimization, then it would be strange that only one approach is included in the Wiki page.
- It is also recommended to revise the citation format in the file based on our example files.
- Please add the case of non convex functions.
- Please add references to support the content in the Introduction section. In-text citations are required.
- Please use Latex equation editor for typing symbols and equations.
- There are multiple methods introduced in the Introduction section. Please expand the Algorithm Discussion section and add more details.
- The provided example is somewhat trivial. Please provide a more sophisticated example.
- It should be "CVXPY" instead of "CVXpy" and "MATLAB" instead of "Matlab" in Application and Conclusion sections.
- It would be better to have subsections of each approach in the Algorithm Discussion section to improve the clarity.
- The logic flow and clarity of both the Algorithm Discussion section and Numerical Example section need to be largely improved.
- Please include citations to support the Wiki contents.
- Please make sure abbreviations should be consistent throughout the context.
- In-text citations are required.
- Please add mathematical expressions to Algorithm Discussion section for explicitness.
- Please provide step by step calculation for the numerical example.
- Adding some figures may help reader to understand the content.
- Please make citations immediately after the citing contents. Please double-check all the citations in your file.
- Please include more citations in the application section to support your statements.
- Please use flowchart/pseudocode for representing the steps of algorithm
- Check the consistency of abbreviations (e.g. what is PAWS?)
- Sections 5-7 can be combined into one section and divided by subsections.
- Please double-check that all cited Figures are clearly attached with citations.
- Please double-check the citations of your references.
- Need significant amount of citation to support the statement
- Mentioned the ways to relax the non convex set, so please provide at least one example either from SDP or RLT.
- Double check with abbreviations (e.g. KKT and SDP should be defined at the beginning sections)
- Equations should be written in a formal way (e.g. 1/2 should be 1 on top and 2 on the bottom)
- Abbreviations should be introduced only once throughout all sections (e.g., QCQP, QP, SDP)
- Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we) in scientific writing.
- Please revise “Ex. Objective” and “Ex. Constraint” parts in a more professional way in the Application section.
- Please avoid the use of the term like "you" or "we" in the Wiki file.
- Please include more citations to support your statements in the application section.
- Please add more citations to support your statement in the introduction section
- Please try to include a flowchart or pseudocode for illustration of the algorithm.
- If DFO is defined in the previous sections, please use such abbreviations consistently (same for other abbreviations).
- Please add subheadings in the Application section for better readability.
- There is a lack of numerical examples for illustrating the global optimization method introduced on the Wiki page.
- The clarification of the equations used in the Introduction section needs to be improved.
- Adding a subsection title to divide the numerical examples will improve the clarity of this file.
- Please add the platforms (e.g. PyTorch, TF) to illustrate how this algorithm is introduced.
- Avoid using contraction (e.g., it’s, doesn’t) and pronouns (e.g., we, let's) in scientific writing.
- Citation of each algorithm should be added in the sentence "such as RMSprop, Adam, and Nadam, exist as well."
- Abbreviations should be introduced one time only throughout all sections (e.g., RNNs).
- The clarity of the alghrithm and numerical example session needs to be improved. It is convenient to list all equations, but not good to present it to others.
- Please revise your reference format.
- More citations are needed for supporting your statement in the introduction section.
- For the section "software tools and platforms" please provide more details, e.g. how PyTorch is using such optimizers and how this platform introduced this algorithm (do not directly copy and remember to add citation if this is not your own idea).
- The sentence "This article mainly introduces Adafactor and its function, algorithm, and application." can be removed.
- Algorithm and theory section is missing.
- Please double-check if the citations are correctly formatted in the text.
- For the application section, it would be good to emphasize the advantages of AdamW compared to other approach by citing the quantitative results from previous literature.
- Please provide flowchart/pseudocode for representing your procedure
- Please provide citations for your statement (e.g. how AdamW used in Finance, where is your source)
- Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we, let's) in scientific writing.
- The code snippet in the Application section can be removed.
- The pseudocode was not well defined. More explanations and logical flow are needed.
- Citations need to be included in the punctuation like period.
- Since this is a modified version of Adam, a comparison with Adam is needed for the numerical example.
- A machine learning case is needed since this is an algorithm designed for machine learning models.
- It is very difficult to clarify different levels of subtitles based on the text.
- References were not well formatted. For example, "[1]" is added to many references with no meaning.
- Some symbols used in the equation lack explanations.
- Provide more citations to support your statements in the Application section?
- Provide a figure to demonstrate the results generated from the numerical example?
- Please provide more applications
- Please provide the platform which used such algorithms
- The Conclusion section is missing.
- The result figures of the numerical example have not been placed in the proper place.
- The numerical example and application parts are still not representative of illustrating NDAM's performance for machine learning models.
- Only suggestion is that providing code may not be appropriate in the Wiki page (all on your decision).
- Citation number should be double checked.
- You can use abbreviations if some special terms appeared multiple times (e.g. Bayesian Optimization -> BO).
- Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we) in scientific writing.
- There is no need to show your own code in this wiki page.
- Avoid adding citations in the conclusion section
- Are the Figures used in the text self-generated or cited? If cited, please add citations. Also the resolution of the figures may need to be improved. Looks like two Figure 1 are included, please fix it.
- Please provide some citations for supporting your statement (e.g. in Introduction)
- Abbreviations should be consistent throughout the context (e.g. GA)
- Please avoid citing or adding links to Wikipedia.
- Please remove the sentence, "as documented in Computational Optimization and Applications."
- More details are expected for Algorithm Discussion section.
- Please provide citations in the application section to support your statements.
- Provide some figures for the numerical study
- Substitute those symbols in a formal way (e.g. T_min should be in a formal way).
- Once the abbr. is defined please use it throughout the context (e.g. SA)
- There are many extra words throughout the sections, (e.g., “Spaces” in the last sentence of Introduction section, “D.” in section 2.1)
- Avoid using pronouns (e.g., we) in scientific writing.
- The caption was missed for the iteration results.
- Provide more references to support the statements made in the Application Section.
- Make sure abbreviations are consistent throughout the context (e.g. Please define DE at the introduction section not in the later section, please check the similar cases as well).
- In-text citations are required.
- The symbols in the pseudocode is not in proper format. Please use Latex equation editor for this.
- Please number and label all figures, use FigureX as a reference in the text.
- Please add more details to numerical example (e.g., replace x = -7 with -5 because f(x1) > f(u1))